Daily Archives: December 3, 2007

Revising still

So I printed off the whole book and started reading through the entire thing without really touching it just to see what needs work AND discovered I LOVE my suspense plot but my romance sucks. Argh. You know, when I wrote this thing, I thought it was brilliant. 🙂
I graduate from citizen’s police academy tomorrow, so I won’t get to write much at all. But that’s okay. I’m making notes, and I’ll go to bed late tonight so I can work on this book that’s driving me crazy because the characters are great and the plot is cool but I’ve written it poorly. I need to work on my heroine’s “voice” too. She’s supposed to be like Lorelai Gilmore, turned her back on the wealth of her past and built her own life. But she’s wimpy in this story until the half-way point.