Ugh. My skeleton isn’t so great. For the most part the story moves from scene to scene with no real purpose and the conflict is flat.
The dialogue is great.
What I hate worst: the way I have the hero and heroine relive the same conflict four times in four ways when it was RESOLVED the first time.
MAN this story needs work. I’ve enjoyed the revisions I’ve done with the last two books. REALLY enjoyed it. I’m trying to remember how to enjoy this. How to look at each scene and wring the emotion out of it. But right now, I’m pretty disgusted.
Tomorrow will be a better day.

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